/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2689319
>warmup
You're still not even half done anon.
Right(his) eye and right cheekbone are still wrong.
Right brow is not sticking out at all, in fact, all of his right side is almost just one curve, even though there's a number of bumps.

Folds on top of the eye are wrong.
Face is too big on the head in general, neck is still fat, instead of slightly hanging. Nose root is not on the proper depth tonally.

Nostril is not the same shape, ear is slightly too low. Nose in general is very flat tonally, there's no side/top to it.

But mostly the issue is with the eyes, they're breaking the likeness the most.
Feels like you're copying elements, ignoring underlying structure, like muscles around the mouth, how they go to the jawline and down. Also your values are here and there, with lots of places being flat.