/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Okay, this anon >>4008857 here again, here's what I'm drawing at the moment. It's better than the previous two portraits I did, but I still think I lay too much pastel and it ends up being an unblendable mess. I could switch to a more expensive paper that would be able to handle this, but then I'd never learn a valuable lesson of thinking before doing, one of the reasons I decided to try traditional art. Also, I could try a different rendering style, with less blending and layering in general, but I wanted to learn the style of William Schneider.