/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2024954
>>2024985
Ok, I hope you don't vomit.

It's supposed to be a Persona / Stand, for those that may not know what that is they basically are humanoid spirits representing the ego of a person.

I based the design on lilies (shoulderpads, neck and scarves are based on petals and so is the midsection) and the sky (the head is supposed to be a curved pipe, similar to refrigerators in nuclear centrals (that's why it has that curved shape) releasing clouds from an oberture. Adutionally clouds will come out from ankles and wrists in the final product), then I gave the whole thing a prince / buffon feel with those clothes.

Besides that, I chose those colours because lilies are closely related to death and the all the western tradition around it and I wanted to convey a feeling of serenity and sadness with that choice of dark and sky blues combined with the cream of the lilies and white of the clouds. The green 'gems' are to both add to the motif of plant life and because it kind of needed a kick. All in all, it's supposed to be an evocative design to remind you of clear skies or the seas and flowers. I like to think of it as a wild flower alone in the prairie.

Now, I'm not too worried about the anatomy, because I could hardly do any better with my current level of skill, but I would like some recommendations on how to improve the design itself and the concept behind it, including a pallete change if you can figure better colours for it.

I used Pixlr to do this, the only real tool at my disposition.

http://imgur.com/NdNKBmX

The imgur link for higher quality.