/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3506879
First of all the pose is... interesting. It's like you took the tits and ass pose and rotated it so the viewer would get neither ass nor tits. Then you dressed her in what looks like clothing designed to flatter the contours of a pregnant woman. The end result is a dumpy, sort of snowmanish silhouette.

I'm not sure whether or not the torso can twist that way, but assuming it can we have a very dynamic pose being completely obscured by the costuming. Now drawing cute girls and designing costumes isn't really my area of expertise but I'll point out some things anyway.

First off why not wrap her garments so they conform to her body? A tight vest or corset works, and you can contrast with a frilled undershirt and a flowing skirt. She can have a cloth hood/ring around her neck like what Robin Hood's merry men would have. Add a bit of movement into them as well as her hair and you can probably sell this pose as happening in real life. If the character is supposed to be a cute girl emphasize this fact!

Also not a fan of dual-wielding crossbows. For one they have to be like over a meter long/wide to have killing force making them very large and heavy to hold with one hand and they also require two arms and a leg to span, sometimes needing extra equipment depending on the type. They also only fire one bolt before needing reloading, and that bolt is balanced on top and not locked in place like a bullet in a chamber would be.

To answer your actual question though, I'd get on pixiv and study anime face proportions and take note of the massive cranial dimensions in relation to facial features. This appears to be the secret to cute faces.