/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6203171
Beg here, I can't really help you correct anything, but I can tell you about the most obvious mistakes I notice at a first glance. I might be wrong on some points.
Her left arm is missing. Looks like she only has a shoulder stub and a hand.
The right arm has to have a really long forearm for her hand stick out from behind her head like that. Also, the hand looks disconnected. I think it's due to the hand being too far to the right in relation to the angle of the forearm. The hand is also realy hard to differentiate from the hair and neck. It also looks like she an additional joint slightly below her elbow. Her upper arm is also very long and doesn't look connected to her shoulder. The perspective on the armpit also looks a little strange.
Her breasts looks like they aren't affected by gravity and are glued on. Especially the right one, and I think the perspective is off.
The face also have a lot of strange things going on, and I'm not talking about things due to stylization.
Her body is 'bumpy' in strange places.
Here's a beg tip I picked up you could use. Try flipping your drawing while making it to catch mistakes. Using reference is also a good idea when drawing poses (and in general)
Other than that, I think you did great, anon. Much better than what I could have done personally. Keep up the good work, you're gonna make it!