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I think I fell down the wrong gesture path.

I've been doing them like this for maybe two or three months. What I thought was the accepted way to communicate gesture of a pose lacks the idea of "guiding lines" like guiding your eye from line to line. There is a little bit of focus on the contour (as much as I fight it) Do I bite the bullet and redo my entire way of doing them from scratch or just muh style it?