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Anonymous Sat Feb 21 07:58:21 2015 No.1990535 [View]
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>>1990522
The foot is fucked up anon, the heel looks like a knee, the sole is completely wrong.

Also, your bodies are on a different level with your faces; an indication that you need to brush up on your figure. Try life drawing or sketch in public and just focus on capturing the entire figure.

As for hatching, from that drawing it seems that your lines are too light. You need to place your marks harder, hatch in different directions and vary the values to properly convey the form.

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