/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3749265
>posts consist of 20% art, 80% text wall
hey, sadlawn v2
you seem to be even MORE full of yourself than he was, so I give you 5 days tops

>>3685478
>>3685483
>>3685484
bahahaha
op got GOT

>>3676675
>>3677344
this thread is lookin good so far
great idea OP

>>3655640
surprise. yall get TWO crits today. rejoice
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>USAUSA
nice shading on the headshot. i hope you polish this one more, you submit alot of half-finished works and i'd love to see something high-effort from you

>bandit
the cast shadows throw me off, but the rest of this has a comfy feel. i like that you used colors other than orange/yellow for the sunset

>dattab
this looks like a colored panel from a comic. really lovely forms/shadow-outlines on the stone!

>CoinHero
i know it's watercolor, but it's still far too blotchy and difficult to read. kudos for trying something different though. that's the key to growth.

>DaijouVU
try doing 3-5 of these in a day for results

>Lazy_Lara
not much going on here. is this traditional?

>Arma
great form. would fug. it'd be worth it to go the extra inch to color the more subtle lines that are used to describe muscles and hair strands. trust me on this.

>Menes
these look official! like something i'd see in Darkest Dungeon. what are they for?

>st⋆rs
you've got basic gesture down. strengthen your forms by diving into anatomy studies- starting with what something you struggle with. maybe feet or leg studies. it will be frustrating, but worth it.

>bunnyburger
bun/10. but the face thing and saddle aren't very convincing. nice job on all those face thumbs! proud of you for the effort.

>Manu
the hand looks really odd. get a pal to take a pic of you in the same pose for a ref. the neck is also a bit thicc. the composition looks promising though

>Aru
very nice! don't forget to draw from imagination/for fun too

>Rakimora
sharpen those edges boi. your machine looks more like a goop than a solid object

>Louse
these studies are fantastic- and i'm glad you did so many of them! don't be afraid to block in shapes with a larger brush, rather than just using lines for everything

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>>3635450