/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2795879
I'm a beginner too but I tried to redline it. I think the issue is that you're not properly constructing things or thinking about perspective. The eyes for example didn't line up properly I think. Another thing is you're not wrapping things around the form, for example, the lips you painted are fairly flat and straight even though they should be rounder and fuller. They are also sloped downward and don't follow the rules of perspective just like the eyes (I think mines are a bit off too). The fulcrum under the nose is painted as a completely straight line when it should have a bit more of a curve and rhythm to it. The eyebrows are also a bit flat and don't properly wrap around the forehead, remember there is a bone there that juts out at the brow line. For the nose, I think you structured it well but you flattened the nostrils too much and didn't align one of them properly so it looks like it's sloping down kinda like the lips.

Again, I'm a beginner too so my advice may be off. Sorry if that's the case.