/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4933207
What’s happening here is a light sparring session,the girl with the white hair gets invited to an underground boxing math , a la Kenyan Asura,does pretty well , sometimes even stomping her opponents, but at the last match she gets punched so hard she goes in a coma for 20 years and from there on it becomes a revenge plot to to kill the guy that knocked her out, also penguins have taken over the world and formed a totalitarian regime, so yep
>>4933204
Oh yes absolutely, this isent my usual style, after the time skip all the characters look less round and soft like this

https://www.instagram.com/miter_gear/

Here’s one I did, open to criticism as always