/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

not much to show today, used refs from people i know and it'd feel weird posting them here. but i did this which i'm pretty happy with in about an hour

>>6898412
darker!
>>6898209
darker!!
>>6898350
use a less line-y brush or commit to the crosshatching with sharper lines, right now this looks kinda blurry and it's killing the forms pretty bad, especially around the stomach. the cleaner areas [raised leg knee and underarm] look good
>>6897934
anons will tell you to draw in higher resolution so we can give better feedback on details, if things simplified wrong to fit this res it'll just "look bad" rather than being something specific or workable. pretty sure there shouldn't be a reflective highlight under the thigh closest to us, definitely draw something higher res and come back though
>>6897705
lots of this looks symbol-drawn, stick to one species and try drawing from reference to start. i like this layout though, maybe choose 2-3 refs, copy and learn from them and then lay them out like this and redraw the lighting to fit?
>>6897409
vilppu vilppu, focus on getting the flow through the body. ex top-middle, the longest line would be down the spine, through the bottom of the thigh, round the top of the knee and down the shin. we have the thigh flow but we're missing the knee-shin and back-neck flow. keep practicing, figures are a bitch to learn