/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6999262
I think you actually mostly nailed the head of the person laying down. The most I changed with him is the clothing folds.the clothing folds wrap around the body, use them to your advantage to portray form.

I think the bigger issue is the person they're laying on. We see their head from below, so we shouldn't be able to see the outline of their jaw, Their head looks very flat. I also advice to use the clavicle and abdominal folds to denote both perspective and form here.