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Anonymous Tue Aug 12 15:19:09 2014 No.1808297 [View]
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>>1807852
Your legs are too long, and the further leg is being pulled off. It would also help to draw the parts of the figure that are hidden by clothes/legs/hands. Just to get that torso and pelvis right. Also, adding cross contours helps you understand the forms and foreshortening better.

That's also pretty hard pose to get right, mainly because of the legs. It's easy to find references from google (incase you didn't already use one).

Haven't touched pencil in two months now (like that would matter), sorry for the shit example.

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