/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3339336
Same guy. Tried to crap together something helpful but wound up feminizing it a bit much. The things to point out are:
>pupil size mildly uninviting
(inverse is girlishly inviting big ones on mine)
>lower/elongate the nose
(thin and long is more graceful, but wide can still be done)
>your facial features were on a tilt to be downward, but the head position wasn't contributing to the effect, making it off
>your ear's rather small. (mine could be considered too big though lol)
remember the idea that it starts right about where the corner of the eye is
>your head seems a bit chubby compared to shoulders, so thinned it out
(though by pinching the chin too much and defining the cheek, you end up with a girl like mine, whereas your girl's face is more reminiscent of a drag queen's)
>neck seems to be craning slightly inward than being a trunk from base
>the line under bottom lip can make a character more manly, you can probably see how the lack thereof contributes to girlishness

In anime-style, more white space is more beauty, while more defined lines in the face makes the character look leagues older.
Hope something of what I've said makes sense for you and helps lol