/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6517416
i see myself in op's pic and i dont like it.

you chicken scratch a lot. measure 10 time and draw once. ghosting lines from drawabox taught me that. also connect dots. that also helps.
learn to hold pen properly and draw with whole arm. wrist, elbow and sholder. mostly elbow and wrist. hand should not rest on paper but can touch it for more resistance and control. drawabox and some others taught me that.
no perspective. cant draw stuff in 3d if dont know perspective. norling and scott robertson taught me that read them i guess. norling is easy. robertson is technical and hard.

idk if this helps. good luck.