/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2694886
Not bad, but the proportions seem off to me. I know you're trying to get things to recede in space so they are getting smaller as you go to the head and shoulders, but it's important to always be aware of the general shape of the shoulders compared to the hips. If you are drawing a muscular man you need broad shoulders and a narrow waist, yet you gave him narrow shoulders and a wide waist, so it looks like you put muscles on top of a woman's skeleton. I think you also exaggerated the foreshortening too much on the close arm and you made that hand massive and not follow the perspective at all.