/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I'm trying to get my figures right before I go and add any complex details
Main things concerning me are the left girl's right arm (our pov), I'm not sure if the foreshortening is coming through or if it's too weak, and the right girl's foot that's behind the other foot. I have thought of changing it so she's just standing upright but I think that'd be too boring. Maybe changing both feet (and legs possibly) so she's in a more interesting pose would be better? what do you think?