/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I'm late to the party. Here's work from my first day

>>2237961
not sure where your light source is. Looks flat, use a light to define your forms.

>>2237959
Don't fuck around with brushpacks until you can control edges with just a harc round. Work on expressing form with value.

>>2237882
Nose looks like its melting off, otherwise decent enough proportions. You reeally need to push+organize your values though, most of the image looks flat because it's all in the 3-5 value range. I suspect part of the problem is the reference photo you're working from is washed-out.

Went to the park today. Had the most trouble with wherd the trees/stumps meet the ground I think. Suggestions on adding detail to the grass/ ground without losing the border? Other crits?