/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1526369
This.
>>1525888
Sorry this is lengthy.

Your coloring ability is decent (though skin could use lighter, warmer colors and be less monochrome brown) and I'm glad you have the will to finish a picture but there are more pressing matters to attend to as the previous anon said.

-Honestly, having the girls jump was a bad idea, especially if your expressions, gestures and anatomy don't complement the action. I would have much preferred if they were on a stage floor and the center girl was pointing up and singing as the ship took off in the back. Right now it looks like she's floating and dancing in the air.
-Girl on the left seems like her body is twisting dangerously, especially since the direction of the feet and knees don't make sense (it's like she's jumping backwards while facing forward).
-Their expressions aren't adding anything. Try to jump and have an expression like the center girl and find yourself awkwardly forcing it.
-Flow of the hair is random. Even if the blast from the ship is blowing air towards them, the strands would not act like that.
-As for lighting, it would be a much stronger piece if this were taking place at night with concert lights (assuming this is an idol theme) or amidst a sunset. Right now, the lighting is random because I'm assuming you don't have much knowledge of light direction.

Do what the anon said: don't polish this anymore, recognize your mistakes, leave this piece alone and go learn fundamentals like gesture, form and anatomy.