/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4104991
i know this is a shitty attempt at fixing your stuff. the main issue i noticed was how short your character looks. it seems as if this wasn't deliberate. i also tried making sense of your poses in the way you drew them. not the way you wanted them to be, but enough to show why they look odd. anatomy wise, i didn't change anything. the arms are beefy as fuck in pose # 2 compared to #1, and your abs in both look like a halloween costume with muscle pads inside the lining. might be from blurring/ airbrushing your colors when youre only using 2 colors total per surface, like with cel shading.

"agitating" is my way of saying they're not blaring issues, but issues nonetheless. otherwise, i think we have pretty similar art styles. are there any artists youre trying to emulate?