/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Can I get some feedback on my watercolor study (Ishida Sui style attempt/ref) and how I can improve on it? /beg/ didn’t give me any feedback so I came here.

Wasn’t confident enough to do the same dark tones as the reference pic so I went for muted. Prolly fugged up the anatomy in more than one place but I’m coming back to digital after being mostly trad.

Any advice on how to improve on this, either on color/light-darkness or anatomy is much appreciated.

>>6157360

Tried to translate the skills to a larger watercolor study (tried to stylize it off of one of Ishida Sui's pics).

Exupery ones, being simpler, are better evidently. Pardon whatever anatomy/whatever else I might've botched. Didn't have the confidence to shade with darker tones so I went for a more muted piece. Should've gone for a G-Pen or fineliner as well.

Still perusing Hampton's book so maybe I'll get a good inkling on how to do light/contrast/shadowy stuff in there.