/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2175876
>>2175862
Not the anon above but I disagree. On the right page the biggest figure's pelvis and legs look off to me, and the dude on the lower right has a massive right arm that is totally out of proportion. The character on the lower right of the left page is a complete fail and the face of the neckless guy on the upper left of that page does not fit his head dimensionally.
The whole picture is full of slightly strange proportions and generally a lack of dimensionality, the only decent drawing IMO is the girl on the lower left.

It's not a disaster for sure, but I think a quick refresher of Loomis would certainly do no harm.