/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4971886
This is me. Tips beyond "fundies" would be nice.
>>4971913
This is really cool anon, but if you want likes on the internet youre going to have to go with something less overwhelming and more pandering. This looks like it should be in a 1989 catalogue for incense. It's literally shocking and overwhelming to the senses before one can actually see the composition itself. This contrast makes it even harder to see what's going on, let alone having to decipher what it is she's doing once i understand it visually. I'm not saying any of these things are bad, I'm just saying that if notoriety is your goal you should go in a different rendering direction.
>>4971948
Cute! Oh wait that's a bomb! I wish kids had come by yesterday. Damn pandemic. >>4972042
Lookin' good! I'm confused as to the erased bits of the lines throughout. What effect is that trying to accomplish?
>>4972053
Watson-kun, did you grab my snuff pouch? We have work to do~
>>4972056
This is the kind of stuff that my work in other mediums just isn't helpful for. Keep it up anon, I believe in you.
>>4972088
Dubs and cute birb. I like it. I've been putting out birb seed every morning and now my yard is full of cute birbs.
>>4972101
His hands are weird but I think the part that gets me is that the sleeves don't bleed into the body enough so it makes me think he's wearing an 80s tank top but then I see the end of the sleeves and my brain gets confused. The lines at the shoulders need to be changed so I don't think he's wearing 8 shirts at once. Keep it up anon!
>>4972141
drawing is fun. Are you having fun?
>>4972191
kawaii desu ne~
>>4972392
Just as we can never fully become or win the game, as we are always in a state of becoming or winning, we can never truly make it. I could break even at a photography art show but it is still another step in the process unto death. That being said anon, it looks nice and I believe in you. It's kinda boring tho. Is that why you added the sparkles?

>>4276083
Thanks anon! I appreciate the fleshed out feedback. I'll watch that and practice what you mentioned. Doodling got me through law school. Ha. I'm gonna save your post in a txt file.

I'm creatively bankrupt but I'm going to try ! I'm sure everything is going to be fine !