/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6471649
Yeah,it's just a brush on "add glow" mode, nothing fancy!
>Really like your work man I'm using your older posts to better my draftsmanship.
awesome man! that's so great to hear, let's get it!


>>6472013
yeah one month is too long. You need to be able to tell if it's not going to work or not and ditch it. You definitely need to read more comics, good comics. I recommend Hayo_cinema.
Right now this sequence is pretty off, because she's wearing a dress in the first two but the 3rd one comes up too abruptly and she's already naked with her tits being fondled. Then the earring show up on the 2nd one? and it seems like her skirt gets longer too. Is she supposed to be getting drunk and taken advantage off? is so, she should be visibly drunk on the 2nd one
then there's the composition and shape balance, which is broken by having the 3rd pose in a different angle and facing the other way. Not that there's anything wrong with using different angles in such stuff(picrel) but the issue here is that you created a pattern with the first two poses, so our brains( that love patterns) see the 3rd pose as being "off", thus breaking the sequence.