/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3686448
Here's a shitty redline. She's literally flat, as in no 3 dimensionality. her back leg should be more obscured, her head is flat and not following the angle that she's facing, neck is too long and out of alignment with her spine, arm in the back is very awkward looking. The hair is a wig sitting on top of her head, her forearm is too small.