/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Wed Nov 15 05:29:37 2023 No.6935943 [View]
File: 603 KB, 1080x1350, the_last_of_us_part_2_by_kuvshinov_ilya-das8c9w.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>6935725
Hey anon, it's not bad. You can go darker on your shadow values which is probably what >>6935744
means. I think this anon means well >>6935887 but his paintover is not good in some places. The planes of the face are less clear and the values are more muddied. Go darker in your shadows to emphasize the form turning away from the light and the form will pop more.

You should also redo the hair. Paint volumes/bundles of hair more so than individual strands like picrel. The strands look ugly, and you lose the form because your values for the hair are also all over the place.

Advanced search
Text to find
Subject [?]Search by post subject. Leave empty for any.
Username [?]Search for user name. Leave empty for any user name.
Tripcode [?]Search for tripcode. Leave empty for any.
Email [?]Search by email. Leave empty for any.
Filename [?]Search by image filename. Leave empty for any.
From Date [?]Enter what date to start searching from. Format is YYYY-MM-DD
To Date [?]Enter what date to start searching until. Format is YYYY-MM-DD
Image hash
Search in	All Posts OPs Only
Deleted posts	Show all posts Show only deleted posts Only show non-deleted posts
Internal posts	Show all posts Show only internal posts Show only archived posts
Order	New posts first Old posts first
Capcode	All Posts Only by Users Only by Mods Only by Admins Only by Developers
Results	Posts Threads
Action	[ Simple ]

Navigation
View posts	[+24]	[+48]	[+96]

/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Search: