/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6259932
you have a decent understanding of form when you're drawing figures, but the faces are lacking in structure. Bottom left girl is the worst offender. Apart from structure, your faces need to be more expressive in general. Middle top girl is supposed to be embarrassed, but her expression looks kind of blank.

Lastly, I think your poses are lacking in terms of eroticism. They're all just kind of standing around not doing anything. I'm posting a krekkov drawing that also has a girl just standing around yet it feels very intense and horny. Try to study it yourself and see what you observe.