/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5236423
the lines are atrocious. you don't have to get rid of them completely but they greatly bring down the quality of the work with how scratchy, thick, and dark they are. the lines don't show any meaningful form, in fact, they kill the form because they don't conform with any cross contour. if you're looking at something and there's no edge, there shouldn't be a line. a lot of what you drew shouldn't be an edge with a line, use tone to show the difference.

i don't do smooth airbrush for everything and don't suggest you should either, but look at the difference in quality when you don't have shitty, scratchy lines all over. the face is flat and too much to fix with the eyes and her looking like they came from a deviant art tutorial and she looks like she has a unibrow.