/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3352541
Only because I didn't do the rest of her. As far as your drawing goes, it's good but I think you made her a bit too short. At least your lineweight makes sense, unlike mine.
>>3352554
Pretty much, I actually drew the thing before I made the thread and wasn't feeling like drawing it again.
>>3352588
I don't know how to express this the best because I can't redline it right now, but the lines going from the ASIS (Landmark front of pelvis) to the knee are set a bit to the middle. I mean the ones that define the form of the upper leg, If you look at the image the shadows/highlights are far to the sides of the legs, I know it's a bit nitpick-y but I think it makes a difference. Another minor thing is the fold where the breast meets the armpit, I feel like its missing the line that would convincingly portray the breast as slightly above the arm.
>>3352636
Damn son, you've got the face down. I like it but I think it's a bit too stiff, I find I have the same issue so I have to intentionally exaggerate the flow when I set the drawing. And the hips could do being a bit wider.

I have more images from NMA if you guys think it would work? Or anyone else feel free to post something. I just want to hear your opinion on when to change the ref seeing as /ic/ tends to be slow.

I have a lot more than pic related these are some I like.