/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4830886
I like this one, but I think there are a couple of issues. The eye and brow looks like a front view but she's in profile. Her mouth is open, but her jaw is straight. Remember, the jaw rotates from the back, right under the ear, like a hinge. So if her mouth is open, the jaw would rotate down and back. The head shape could use some work as well. One other part I changed, was to add the shoulder area and drop her left arm down a bit.
I like the hand though, looks good!