/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3984701
great stuff, inoue kiyoshirou is another great one with a similar style.

>>3376478
Oh man much better. Now her pussy feels tight, gripping onto that tentacle. Nice

>>3376480
That we cant see the bulge in the close up makes if feel kinda awkward, as if the rest of her body vanished. Also it feels like to me as if her buttocks are kinda missing in that close up but I dont know if you have tried that already and if the way you did it looks better or not.
Lastly I think the insides of her pussy and her ass look too perfect and symetrical and for a tentacle that can bend in any direction its awefully straight. I dont have a fitting image to show you what I mean sadly. The panel under the top right one in pic related kind of shows how the folds ( at least in the ass ) alternate on the sides and arent like a cirle going all around. Which looks a lot more atractive imo.
Sorry I hope you understand what I mean.
Otherwhise very nice.

>>3375984

>>2650918
How the fuck do i compose my panels /ic/? do i just make more important panels bigger or is there
a more complicated rule? like how do you come up with shit like this?