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>>4702310
That’s more along the lines of how I would have done it. The pitch was simply “lets do a one shot about Rosenrot, where unlike Red Hood, she IS the wolf, and she lures the hero in and kills them.” Everything else hadn’t been worked out, and I left it all in his hands basically. Then, from his original script, we worked together on the name, as he at the time didn’t know how to do names on his own, so I worked with him on it to kinda break down my thinking process. As in previous works, we kept running into the problem of me having to interpret his script, and there being a massive disconnect there. The eSports one basically got scrapped because the final story for the first chapter wound up being a melodramatic clusterfuck. Which was basically several months of work, totally down the drain (years really if you consider all the other work I’d done designing characters, and thinking up ideas for it, worldbuilding, and even designing a fighting game). And look, idc all that much, kill your darlings. It’s part of the learning process. But all the moreso my irritation at him not using this time between him having finished the name for this (two months back) and now, to draft out more names on his own like he’d said he would.