/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4699198
Ohhhhh I see what you mean
I should fix the thumb on the hand on her waist, maybe raising it up would work better
I didn't realize what you meant because I was seeing it as a thumb this whole time
Here's the reference, sadly that fucking hand is cropped (maybe doing the same would save me some effort, I'll see tomorrow)

You might realize that I changed a lot of the lightning and cloth folding, that's a subtle nod that I'm retarded