/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2592631
Definitely lacks good structure (think in tubes/boxes, see sticky, bridgman, vilppu, etc). The pinch at joints is usually too much. Also, shading is too wishy-washy. Needs definite shadow groups and separation between the dark/light before you go in for details (see frazetta, rubens, caravaggio, etc.). Did a quick redline, hopefully it helps some.