/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4975203
>>4975407
I think the biggest thing to fix is the neck.
Animu necks are much thinner than normal, and thus most of the time don't connect to the ear, see
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5653057
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5653199
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3663137&tags=kuro_chairo_no_neko
This is how I would do it, notice a pretty big change in the neck's position.
I also changed the mouth for what I consider is the more common way to draw the smile, and moved her eyes a bit towards the centre of the head.
(*) is how I draw heads in this angle, of course you can do it however you like.
As for the pose, I think the bigger issue is her right arm, but all in all I don't think it's terrible, she would probably be uncomfortable, also give her left leg ( her foot looks stiff imo ), but I guess I you wanna tackle that issue, you may wanna do gesture studies.