/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1697223
>Anything in particular I need to work on?
Head length vs torso length
Head width vs shoulder width
Proportions in general
His right hand is twisted. Try doing that with your hand in real life, not the sort of thing that would go well with boxing.

Read Figure Drawing for all it's Worth by Loomis.

>>1697248
Beat me to the punch (dohohohoho). In that guys defense there are boxing shorts that go up to the highest abdominal muscles like that.

>>1697212
>draw a few of the Loomis "fun with a pencil" heads
The features (nose in particuler) just seem to get cruder and more 2D. I tried to straight up copy Loomises '3-ball' nose several times but it doesn't come out right. Tried a DA tutorial as well (Nose #6). All the noses I've done for this drawing are now labeled (except the one still attached to the face).