/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4854190
>>4854189
Also here is an explanation about the lights in the eye I made here on /ic/ like a year ago when someone asked me explain how the lights the left below woomie's eyes work. None of the full pictures are my work tough I only overpainted the top right.

This might be completely useless but what the hell, maybe not.

>>3929772
Ok, let us analyze the eyes. I have noted some observations here.

Yours are slightly closer to each other but the 3rd eye distance between is relatively okay. Notably yours are missing a pupil and the iris is way smaller which gives her a more mature older look I thought this was intentional considering she looks older in general because of the more adult body compared to the usual child body of woomies. It is good that you shaded the white part fo the eye as well that can help. Yours has massive eye lashes.

The ref has 3 different highlights one from above one from below and one from the side it has a pupil and the iris very large, and the upper eyelid covers it slightly to make it look like in a more natural resting state. She doesn't have visible lashes to add to a more childish look.

I tried to find a middle ground between the two on the tp right.

Other stuff I would add, for shading use colors that tare similar to the base color like a bit more red for the skin instead of grey.

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