/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4391076
Consider doing some quick sketches or gesture drawing from https://quickposes.com/en/gestures/random to help you understand how a figure flows through graceful S curves and how there is a rhythm involved between forms. Secondly continue to experiment with the proportions until you solve how to keep all forms in relationship to each other for instance the size of the hand is proportional to the bottom of the chin and to the browline which may translate to the top of the eyes in Amawus. Changing the perspective will help invoke a powerful composition that will leave the figure in either a dominant or submissive state depending on what you want to convey. Pick and chose which forms to invoke foreshortening and space such as overlapping T forms without investing too much in refining these same forms - it is all about simplicity and how effective you are in conveying abstract forms that suggest real world anatomy rather than conveying it fully. The best way you can describe an abstract form is to draw an incomplete circle and have your mind fill in the gaps, when it comes to Amawus less means more and the more you use this abstract form of suggestion and leaving it up to the viewer to interpret forms the more successful you will be in avoiding the uncanny valley.

Now open wide fuccboi.