/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Here I go giving advice I dont even follow >_<
>>6361800
You're getting much more readable! I think you'd still benefit from some practice with no camera move or only camera move.
>>6369547
Seems to speed up going right when hits ground?
>>6370170
ぺろぺろ. Try animating just a line first to get a nice smooth licking motion, then draw the tongue over that. The upward motion especially looks jittery.
>>6375713
Great anime :)
>>6377848
Clouds and flag are pretty comfy
>>6378507
Lol, nice
>>6382673
Clouds moving much slower in second shot looks weird