/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3991245
Good shit on most the image! The mouth and teeth stick out face as they lack detail compared to the rest. Do not neglect them the edges of the grinning mouth have dark holes to show where the row of teeth end, since the teeth are arranged in a semi circle the sides can be made to have shadows on to show that they are more inside the mouth tan the ones in the center.

Most notable there is a lot of hair on the picture but it is is not reflective enough. HAir is a quite reflective and shiny surface so add more light to it overall, it should also reflect the white cape as well.

I tried to fix the knee as >>3991267 mentioned that it was weir.d What is more important tough that the straps and the opening of the boots should curve downwards because we are looking down on them was below the horizon.

The raised arm feels a bit flat even tough the other arm shows that it is not so I tried to use some shading to make it appear more 3D.

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