/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3877227
Felt bad for not giving you criticism, so here I go: the hair lacks form, it's pretty wonky-- since the rest of the figure has such great feeling of dimension and weight, for the hair to just kind of be there like that draws the eye, and is so far the worst part imho. Hiding the right hand is also cowardly, unless she's supposed to be flicking the bean, which is great, but that hand feels off-- either it's too far down, in which case the angle feels off compared to the pubic area and torso, or you need to pull it up a bit so we start to see first knuckle. Otherwise loving it so far, and hope you do another perspective of the same pose for practice, and to show off more of what's going on with that right hand-- if you catch my drift.