/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2740360
Oh shit, the shading on the torso made me overlook the actual shape of that rib cage.
It's way too big and way too defined. Bring it out further to the left and tuck it in more on the right side.
Also erase some of the lines, replace them with shadows or something.
There's also some other anatomy problems, look up a reference and work from that.
The couch looks decent.

>>2727896
I don't know about you but when I'm drawing and things like anatomy and values are lacking I can't move on until I try to fix them to the best of my ability, and even then I'm usually not satisfied. I guess I just don't value being "artsy", not that it's a bad thing, there's clearly a market for it.

>>2704025
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