/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello beg. I cannot say i dont hate my todays shit. Dunno, maybe it wont look as bad in the document. And the white needs fixing. Killllll meee

>>6711604
thumbs up
>>6711529
first rule of capitalism: market yourself. if you want to sell anything the potential buyers need to know you exist.
>>6711513
that drapery is awkward. successful drapery has healthy mix of hard and soft edges creating folds. yours has no hard edges
>>6711486
the head to body ratio seems sus. to succesfully draw haircut you need to feel the form of the groups of hair. some go around the skull, some go opposite direction. you have to carefully draw them without crossing the lines
>>6711386
PYW
>>6711232
pick up keys to drawing and enjoy the moment of enlightenment when you reach like page 4 where it tells you what restating is
>>6711208
when your drawing doesnt fit on the paper is i think solved in chapter 3
>>6711162
i copy it + read it + do assignments. dunno if it is ideal approach but so far it has been working out nicely
>>6711087
my advice is to not skip faces and hands. you dont learn how to draw difficult parts by skipping them
>>6711084
abs, things and various parts of background are hopelessly flat due to lack of lighting showing the form. otherwise it is cool tranny
>>6710845
3
>>6710825
no, tracing as complete beginner only inflates your ego which will make actual drawing even more painful (why is my shit so much worse than my traced shit???). pick keys to drawing
>>6710820
very nice thots
>>6710815
she looks like she eats crayons. cute loli
>>6710582
sharpen your pencil and do final contours before posting for more (You)s. or use pen. like this its too muddy
>>6710546
stiff. very weak feet and hands
>>6710482
SOUL
>>6710402
just draw
>>6710383
very nice anime thot
>>6710377
yeah it is miles better but like: why dont you advance in KtD? Dont redo the projects until they are perfect. There is even checklist at the end of each chapter which tells you IF you should redo any of them.