/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7121324
Well, i think that the folds are more because of the type of clothes i have in mind than anything else, in another page i draw another a hoddie and made the folds more softer, besides from the page 37 until the last page, people will be under the rain so i draw the clothes like that for a few more pages

>>7121332
I was going to do it later

>>7121338
I'm sorry i came from a lineage lf heavy texted mangas, but i think i will try to trim it down later

>>7121381
After i'm doing posting lineart, i won't post until i fully finish the first page w/bc and all

>>7121381
>I know I keep harping on this, but that's because I'm a grammar nazi.
Don't worry, i truly appreciated, when i'm done and start with the typesetting i will put more effort onto it

>>7121612
The thing with the bubbles it was that i was going to make them, but they fill in with black, and when i fix it, i reallized that my stupid ass put all the text in white, so i got lazy and i will have to change it later

2 pages left to hit the half of the first chapter... how can i post the full first half if already posted 17 pages?

I know that it may not gather much interest, but i would like to post the full first half and get some opinion on how the story is going, also i hope that the anons that offered some proof reading and correction a long time ago, are still here to help me a little