/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2216250

Hey, different guy here, and I'll try to give you some pointers.

Keep in mind I'm not great, but I think I can help give you an idea.

1. Keep cool, remember where you are. You are on both an anime imageboard AND an artistic community. Don't be naive when it comes to comments.

2. Proportion is important, be mindful when you draw, I know you can tell the difference. As you are studying Loomis, do what he says in regards to drawing skeletons, as I think you didn't use one. I understand they are boring, but they help you understand.
Main spots of trouble are torso width, leg size and footsies.

3. If you want to practice shading, I'd recommend working with grey rather then colour, I find it easier to tell the difference.

4. Look into Bridgman or Hampton, they break down anatomy into a more visually simple method.

5. Even when you are just practicing try to do the most you can to render good general forms (i.e skull shape, abdomen, etc.). They don't have to be good, but try to be more accurate, this will help in the long run.

6. Keep practicing boyo, and the work will all pay off.

I understand I'm no exemplar, but I hope it helps.