/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3173532
well thanks anon. i will try to do that. And ill check out the framed ink then.

But i will say this about your work to be fair
Cons
>snake girl is literally floating in the air (ironic since you tell me how important perspective is
>no shadows
>no lineweight whatsoever (specifically check out the finger area of the hand. Many manga artist like to keep the middle parts lines light, but the ends big to indicate the sense of space
>nose is out of perspective
>mouth as no 3d weight at all, loos slaped on
>the ribbon in back of head is as flat as clip art
>boring composition
>boring angle, likes she posing like a pokemon
Pros
>you clearly spent time studying how to reder black hair
>the torso is strangely dynamic with its clothing folds
>nice design on the scales

And i know you hate manga, but i seriously suggest you read tokyo ghoul to get a better idea on how to draw mouths in a 3d way.

>>2461207
saw this picture in a thread awhile ago, hope it helps

>>2419844

>>2104237

14 pages in 3 days? man that is insane, I'm really slow, I hope I'll get faster the more pages I do, right now a full page takes me around 4-5 days of hard work, with color and all.

By the way, anyone who is into comic/storyboarding needs to read this book right now, it's called Framed Ink, and tells you everything you need to know about composition for camera shots, one of the best ivestments I've made.