/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4400293
Read this and start practicing box forms and pick up perspective made easy by ernest norling.

>>1512159
>I used construction, thought of them as 3d forms and tried to model the planes
Then you didn't do it correctly. I don't see any of your original construction lines, but I'm gonna guess and tell you that there's more to construction than drawing a centerline and an eyeline. Draw the box that contains the head, then build up the head from there.

You're getting distracted by superficial details, like the hair and the individual features. You need to draw the whole head, not just the face and hair. Draw the cranium, then place the hair later. You also aren't drawing any of the features in perspective, nor are things aligned correctly in perspective. Again, the box in perspective should help with all of that. Pic related from teal.

I suggest you take the time to learn your perspective inside out, and how to draw all the basic forms from any angle in perspective. Next, learn how to build complex forms from basic forms. Then study the major forms and proportions of the head, as well as the major forms of the features of the face.

>>1485884