/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4257734
Thanks, I'm trying really hard to not bother about small shit since this is detrimental in many ways, im just autistic as hell about this kind of stuff. I have started to draw since the previous December, but I still get pissed at how much I screw up hands no matter how much I grind.
This is my previous work, I can't help but stare at that ugly hand on her breast.

>>4256464
>>4256458
And this one is my previous drawing. Hands ruin everything again.

Ok, fuck it, tried to ask everywhere except from here. This is was done as a birthday gift for a friend, I don't really like furry, except for sindoll and kemonono. So I tried to draw something... not so western.
Do you guys think this is a functional style? Does it looks good in terms of lewdness, composition and anatomy?
I started to learn to draw around October or September last year, I suffer from chronic depression and made learning to draw one of my main objectives this year. I'm not sure If I'm being successful, I feel like each one of my drawings is a painful process.
I'm trying to draw something resembling an scenario/background for everything I do to avoid that bad habit of characters floating in a blank page. Whenever I finish something, I get back to it in the following days and keep trying to improve it until I become tired of it.