/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2073679
Not bad anon, but the values are reading very muddy. Everything has the same local value and the value range is too restricted. Also be careful of proportions.

I tried jsut showing a few different local colours instead of everything being a middle grey--I his tunic a white, his hair and gloves black, and then left a middle tone for his skin. Showing some layering to the design helps too--he's got a sorta thing over his shoulders, then his sleeves go down, show his arm underneath poking out, then a big thick leather glove over his hands. At his collar you can see he has some other piece of clothing underneath. And on top of everything I put a couple simple pattern things. A cross type thing on his chest and some line things by the sleeves.