/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3233402
>I have no idea what fundamentals you practiced
I had practiced mostly using Vilppu's method of construction and basic anatomy. I only got into gesturing very lightly before classes started up and I lost a lot of my free time.

>same stiff pose with one leg awkwardly jutting out.
The pose has to be the same, I was drawing the same piece again. It is quite stiff, it was an absolute pain boxing out and I couldn't find a reference if I tried, but most of the stiffness lies in the arms.

The legs are relatively natural, it's a simple strut like pose (I just stood up and did it myself, and it feels natural,) but the arms and hands are very odd.

>(unless her looking like a dwarf was intentional)
She looks like she'd be maybe 5'3"~4" standing straight. The calves are a bit short, I'm not disagreeing, but not as bad as you seem to make it.